Exemple de lettre en anglais bts

Voici un exemple d’une lettre en anglais que j’avais faite, il doit y avoir des fautes je pense, mais la structure est bonne.

Mr. Bertrand Dupont
2 Rue de la paix
Parise
FRANCE

12th May 2006
Mr. John Dawson
General Manager
World of Wonders
10 Queen Street
Cardiff, CF1 3BF
UNITED KINGDOM

Dear Mr. Dawson
SIGHTSEEING TOURS IN WALES

Referring to our conversation, we’d like to go to Wales in Heritage Coast and we’re planning to stay there for two weeks, 2-15 June.
We’d like to fly to Cardiff and we’d like to hire a big car for six persons for two weeks.
We were planning to stay one night in Cardiff and we’d like to book a double room with a bathroom and two twin-bedded rooms with a bathroom in a two-star hotel near centre of town.

We’d go to Rhosili and we’d were planning to stay one week in bed and breakfast with half board. We’d like to have documentation on excursions, could you send us brochures.

We’d like to come back to Cardiff for two nights and to have the same hotel with the same room.
We wanted to go sightseeing, could you recommend us where we could find a good pub with Welsh music, restaurant and tourist attractions.

We look forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely

Your name et last name

Encs

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